Monday, February 04, 2008
DraftWP
So there is a full AWP post (or perhaps series of posts) coming this week when I get caught up, but I am not going to be caught up today, so here's a draft I started Saturday evening and finished about 95% on the plane home. It's definitely rawer than usual (3 lines in particular I think are bad) and not really in my dominant mode, but I figured it was one of those hurriers, so I ought to put it up.
I stole the title from Inigo Montoya in The Princess Bride. I stole one phrase from John Gallaher. I stole one line from something I said Friday. I stole the gimmick in the pivot line from an existing published poem of mine.
I stole the title from Inigo Montoya in The Princess Bride. I stole one phrase from John Gallaher. I stole one line from something I said Friday. I stole the gimmick in the pivot line from an existing published poem of mine.
