Wednesday, October 03, 2007

 

Where the drafts and the antelope play



# posted by Steven D. Schroeder @ 8:57 PM
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Steven,

I enjoyed this poem. The language in the first and last stanzas is especially strong. The sleeping / bag line break tripped me up a bit, but I think this is a great poem. Thanks for sharing!
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : October 16, 2007 9:26 AM
 
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