Wednesday, February 21, 2007

 

Draft in the grass


As with a number of my poems, Shawn will recognize numerous references from our past here, I think. Happy birthday (Thursday), Shawn!

Comments:
We can play "Traps and Surprises" when you come to visit, but I think the hard wood floors won't be as forgiving at the carpeted ones in my parent's old home.
 
I kind of wanted to work "unnecessary roughness" in there, but it didn't really seem within the spirit of the poem.
 
really enjoyed this one - the precision of the MLB rulebook with the spirit of 7-year-olds making the game up as they go. Well done.
 
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