Sunday, November 13, 2005

 

Draft



Comments:
I love the surrealist nature of this poem: always a plus. What about "dark" clay instead of "darkest"? This poem is so amazing. I enjoy how you quote tool.
 
I'm glad you like it. You're probably right meaning-wise on "dark" versus "darkest."
 
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